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               in this microcosmic
               corner I have stolen

               your alcohol & I am
               missing the color

               you made the world turn
we realized today that i'm the only person in my group of friends who has never been diagnosed with a mental illness

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Given 2014-05-15
intimate thunder by fake-theory is quick and delightful, moving from abstraction to concreteness and back again in a few swift, delightful lines ( Featured by ShadowedAcolyte )
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CharlesDraws Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Student Digital Artist
The poem's cool, but it's the description that stands out to me.

Seems everyone has something these days.
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SkeyeStorm Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Well internet addiction is a disorder now, so that should a pretty big factor.
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TheWeeLad Featured By Owner May 15, 2014
I like this... but I don't get it...

oh well!
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations on your well-deserved DD!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconlainloveplz::iconflyingheartsplz: :clap::clap::clap:
I’m very happy for you!!! :iconloveloveplz: :tighthug:
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BlackBowfin Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice work.  Congrats!
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lollirotcat Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Student Writer
I love this
Congrats on the DD! :)
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alapip Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
better find a new doctor.

no, your poem isn't crazy.
it's just me trying to be funny. :ashamed:
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straygod Featured By Owner May 15, 2014
i hear diagnoses have become quite fashionable
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caiyo474 Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
yes. yesssss
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AnjaMillen Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Professional General Artist
wonderful- well deserved dd
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ShadowedAcolyte Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014
This reminds me of the poem "This is Just to Say" for some delightful reason: www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/pr…
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KyoumaH Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome, re your descriptive note XD
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fake-theory Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013
indeed
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing.
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fake-theory Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013
thank you <3
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure. <3
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v-espertine Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
:love:
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fake-theory Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
love!
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