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                        more than you will
               ever understand,

               you smell like
               an impressionist

               painting. cigarettes,
               new car, shirt stuck
               to skin. laughing:

               I wonder what
               would happen if we
               fucked right here,

               sacriligiously.
               no nerves,

               just confidently lacing
               the space between
               planets with electric
               light
literally. try to eat it.

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:icontreeparty:
treeparty Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013
just really curious about your inspiration for this ahhhLove 
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dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013
Your fantastic work has been featured in Friday Night Features.
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fake-theory Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013
thank you! <3
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DogmaticKerr Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow :lmao: This is awesome for its raw force and, particularly, its delicious imagery. The last stanza, in context... :heart: oh :love:
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:iconfake-theory:
fake-theory Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013
thank you! i'm glad you enjoy it <3
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DogmaticKerr Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Quite thoroughly :heart: :worship:
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cality Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
'you smell like 
               an impressionist

               painting.
'

That is so, so lovely. The last stanza is stunning as well. :)
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:iconfake-theory:
fake-theory Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
thank you! (:
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:iconcality:
cality Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure! :heart:
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:iconflummo:
flummo Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Student Writer
Now this. :heart:
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:iconfake-theory:
fake-theory Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
thank you <3
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creataire Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this was great. kind of american-dream, lust-meets-love? haha, trying not to get too stuffy with how it felt. really good though. keep it up.
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:iconfake-theory:
fake-theory Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013
thank you!
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toxic-nebulae Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Student Writer
you smell like 
               an impressionist

               painting

:heart:
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fake-theory Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013
<3
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SlayerSlovak0207 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013
It was hard not to chuckle here. Day Better by 70%
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:iconfake-theory:
fake-theory Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013
haha thank you!
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TheEmptyChest Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013
Definitely cheesy, but oh so delicious. :D
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:iconfake-theory:
fake-theory Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013
thanks! (:
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:icontheemptychest:
TheEmptyChest Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013
Welcome! :D
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:iconv-espertine:
v-espertine Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013
cheesy little thing
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:iconfake-theory:
fake-theory Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013
yes.
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