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               a materialist
               inside of you

               unknitting your sweater
               & in your dream

               you are a wolf eating
               a flower in an orange field. the world
               is ending. an unnamed girl stains you

               as if she were tea
               giving up to a
               foaming ocean.

               she writes a story: the unrequited
               blurry visions of two visionaries
               separated by antibiotic resistance.

               I'm sorry we have nothing left
               to say to one another tonight

               & for our past together
               having a lace quality to it.
               we drink from a jar as
               big as the republic;

               we disagree, yet we
               carry on with it.
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Personghost Feb 8, 2014  Student Writer
Holy crap this is beautiful and intelligent I loved it Hug 
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SilverInkblot Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hi there! Just a note to let you know that I've featured this piece in my end-of-the-year journal feature :)
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i-am-a-bridgewalker Nov 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
those first four stanzas are exquisitely heartbreaking.

you have talent.
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back-bones Oct 15, 2013  Student Writer
ahhh this is so original and just overall very lovely. thank you for writing this.
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toxic-nebulae Oct 11, 2013  Student Writer
the last two lines
:heart:
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:iconexistencewesummonyou:
"Symptoms of red" is such an intriguing title - like the sensation of a color is a disease you might have.

And this materialist inside of me sounds like a jerk. Is it Richard Dawkins? I bet it's Richard Dawkins, he's such a jerk. I needed that sweater to stay warm in this cold and uncaring world.

ANTWAY this an interesting, interesting poem.
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UntamedUnwanted Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your lovely work was featured here untamedunwanted.deviantart.com…!
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your wonderful piece has been featured here: foraoises.deviantart.com/journ… :)
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:iconfake-theory:
thank you darling <3
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